All right! My first thoughts are that this is waaaaaaaay too short. I especially dislike the hurry of chapters 13 & 14. But this is supposed to be a short story per the project for which it's written (UMSL Creative Writing Master's program application).
Will I expand this into a novel? Quite possibly. I have to finish my master project Desert Trees first. I'm hoping that to be done in 2010, at least that's my resolution.
Aside from the brevity I'm pretty satisfied as someone who hasn't read it all together yet. That's the next step, organizing and polishing. The final result will be republished here.
That's it. Time to dwell on the story as a whole now. Thanks if you've been following along!
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